My ideas on a volcanic explosion  

Posted by Feral Beast in

Hello.

I'm going to write a story, and pretend that there is a volcanic explosion happening.

One day I was sitting in my room playing a Mario game on my DS.
As I was about to get on to the 5th level, the ground started shaking.
So I just went outside into the backyard to see what was going on out there.
When I went out there, there was a great big crack down the middle of the backyard.
When I went to get a closer look, I could hear a whimpering sound coming from the crack.
I then found out it was our Blue Heeler.
So I climbed down carefully and put her in my arms.
I then realized that I wouldn't be able to climb up with her in my arms.
So I climbed out without her in my arms and went into the house for a Back-Pack.
But when I got to the top the house was reduced to rubble.
And then I had a thought of leaving her down there, but how could I do that, she's my best friend.

So then I started looking through the rubble to find a Back-Pack.
Eventually I found one.
When I found it, I raced to the giant crack and climbed down as fast as I could.

When I got to the bottom, I put her in the Back-Pack.
I then climbed up the wall of the giant crack as fast as I could.

Again I went through the rubble, trying to find a rope or a leash for the dog, but then I found something that would explain where Mum and Dad had gone to.
I found their life-less bodies in the rubble.
I could then see in the distance a wave of pyroclastic gas and rocks coming towards me and the dog.
So I raced through the rubble as fast as I could and found a leash.
I was about to bury them when I turned around, and found that I wouldn't have enough time.

So I put the leash on the dog and got into the car, luckily I'm almost six foot tall, so I'd easily reach the pedals.

I then put the car in reverse and drove out of the drive-way with the dog in the back of the car.
Everyone had left Clayton except a few people.
I then came to a highway which was blocked.

After two hours I reached the city.
There was no one on the streets. everyone was either in a building or in their car, even then they were trying to get away.

I then put the car radio on and I found out why everyone were inside or in their cars, there was a warning on the radio that had been taped and it said this: "Warning: everybody get in to a tall building or in their car drive as fast as possibly from Victoria. There has been a volcanic explosion." and it was going on and on.

I then made it into NSW, where me and the dog parked the car and had a sleep in there.
And ever since then I have been living in NSW.

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5 comments

"I could then see in the distance a wave of pyroclastic gas and rocks..."

Always an impressive sight, even on film. I wouldn't be too keen on seeing a pyroclastic flow close up though.

June 4, 2008 at 6:31 PM
Anonymous  

Did you know the ground rumbling and the ground having a crack was like the way El Monstier the volcano appeared.

P.S: Heard the story of the cow that crossed the cracked road? He fell in it. (It is not a joke to let you know.)

June 6, 2008 at 4:28 PM

Your right Brian, I hate to see it up close.

No,I didn't know that, thanks for letting me know.

P.S: Love the joke.

June 7, 2008 at 1:34 PM
Anonymous  

Did you run out of time to write the ending, eh? ;)

June 9, 2008 at 12:11 PM

Yeah, I did run out of time.

June 16, 2008 at 8:05 PM

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